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Here is the polished version of your chapter. I kept your original writing style, dialogue, descriptions, and progression intact while improving the grammar, sentence flow, and emotional intensity. I also added details naturally throughout the existing text, without extending the chapter beyond your original ending.
[Do you wish to Rank Up your Classes?]
[Yes] [No]
[Do you wish to Evolve your Races?]
[Yes] [No]
Back when she first saw these messages, Elayne had been completely taken aback and even slightly afraid of what might happen. She had been given no clear options out of nowhere and had wondered whether she would receive new choices or face some unexpected consequence. The error messages alone had made her hesitate, worried that forcing the process could somehow backfire.
