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Rework

Log 1

The story will be reworked from scratch to be updated for a better and actual accurate storytelling of the story and every moment.

Hatred's form will be reworked, as same as the encounter and everything done until UltSans is back as normal. Will be extremely longer but more immersive the encounter, as every second will feel like a drowning of suspense and uncertain danger of what is even going on.

There will be a lot more SCP interactions with SCP-9743. A lot more Safe SCPs, quite some Keter ones, and even to be put into the test with some real dangerous ones.

A'malther will have vocabulary changes, as after using SCP-914 on himself, he will stop using Englush by default, and will accidentally be talking in a different language.

The reports will be moved to a different volume, so if anyone doesn't want to read the narrative and just the reports, or the opposite, anyome will be able to find what they prefer to read to not do so twice.

All volumes will be reorganized in different way. No in seasons, but in time moments.

There will be a lot more chapters, and each will be way longer with more than a thousand to two thousand words. Special chapters will have up to three thousand.

There will be a rework in A'malther's language, as an extension to SCP-049's language.

SCP-9743 will be more canon and respectful to his story and lore, along being actually real to who he is and the way he is.

SCP-9743's mahic will be reworked to fit in his actual cappabilities.

The narrative will be a lot more detailed and clear with no contradictions.

Zarethra will now be a constant in the story that will affect actively and passively everything and everyone.

Log 2

After consideration and seeing the best way to organize the chapters and the founfation reports, I decided to delete them and just let the story be told in SCP-9743's perspective.

Hatred will be more parasitic and symbiotic, canonical to its nature as soul parasite symbiote.

Narration will be more personal, immersive and intimate with the mental state of SCP-9743.

Chapter 1 will be between 4000 to 5000 words as is the most special one in the beginning.[1]

Interactions between SCPs will be between 2000 to 3000 words. If an interaction between SCPs is very short, will be expanded by adding story progression of SCP-0743's or the foundation's POV.

SCP-9743 will be more close and personal with the guards, bipolar with scientists, and hateful against D-Class. SCP-9743 will also be more proactive in his interactions with the SCPs, for example, will be more open and closer with SCP-049, will be more susceptible to SCP-035.

Zarethra will directly affect thode who she consider an obstacle in her script of what should happen in the future of SCP-9743.

Hatred will be a lot more constant, also will be classified as SCP-9744, and Zarethra as SCP-9745 in the classifications. Despite at first they'll be SCP-9743-2 and SCP-9743-3.

Log 3

SCP-9743 will have his own way of talking. His speech will be a mix of wingdings and english after being improved via SCP-914. This is random and he cannot control when a letter will be un wingdings or english.

The old God's dictionary will be reworked from scratch with a new original language for Scarlet King and his daughters.

The entire story will be like a completely different story, with evenrs not happenning or doing so differently than originally.

SCP-9743 won't abandon as did to Iris in the original from nowhere.

The story perspective is second person of UltSans' POV.

The narrative will be focused on tje day to day and continuity of the foundation, not focussing only to the experiments or encounters or conflicts.

Creativity will be the main tool, creating canonical[2] lore to each character individually.

Log 4

SCP-049 speaks english, but his oroginal language is French.

SCP-9743 will have very unique interactions with specific SCPs, as for example, will be unable to hear SCP-343, or have a strange interaction and encounter with SCP-682.

Scarlet King's language will be done in the next few days, and published to be learnt by anyone.

A'malther's children will have their own variation of Scarlet King's language.

There will be always grammar issues and typos in the story, is my signature and a consequence for writing too fast and expressing myself poorly.

Log 5

SCP-049's language will also be created reshaping French i to a more old, unique, elegant French.

Created languages cannot be used for now as are not recognized by the system of WebNovel.

Each if A'malther's children will have their own language modification, fitting not only their bloodline, but also the biological anomalous modifications each has.

[1] Ended being slightly above 5.100 words

[2] Canonical is not the same to Accurate. This means I'll create stuff that isn't neccessarily real, but feels to fit as if was real and accurate.

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