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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1: The Move

The sky over Zimbabwe was clear that afternoon, the kind of blue that made the heat feel honest. Mark walked home from school with his bag slung over one shoulder, tie loosened, shirt untucked. Same route. Same cracks in the sidewalk he'd memorized for years.

The front door was already unlocked. That was the first wrong thing.

His mom worked doubles at Parirenyatwa. She was never home before dark. Mary was always out — friends, netball, someone's house, anywhere but here. But today the house smelled like onions, tomatoes, and stewing beef. Music played low from the kitchen.

The table was covered. Sadza, chicken, greens, gravy, even a bottle of Fanta sweating on the tablecloth. Enough food for a birthday. Nobody's birthday was this month.

Mark dropped his bag on the couch. "Hey... did I forget something?"

His mom turned from the stove, wooden spoon in hand. Her nurse's shoes were by the door, but she still had her work pants on. "Shower first. Change. Then we'll talk."

No argument in her voice. Just that smile — the one she used when she'd already decided something and Mark would find out when she was ready.

He nodded and headed down the hall.

In his room, he peeled off the uniform and caught himself in the mirror. Slim. Scrawny in the shoulders, but his forearms had gone ropy from carrying buckets for Gogo next door. Dark circles under his eyes that never really left, even when he slept. Short black hair he kept brushed but never styled. He looked like a kid who listened more than he spoke.

Fifteen minutes later he came out with a towel on his shoulders, steam trailing behind him. He combed his hair, brushed his teeth, threw on a plain black t-shirt and grey sweats. When he came back, the plates were set and Mary was already seated, leg bouncing under the table.

"Sit," Mom said. "Close your eyes. Let's pray."

They did.

"Lord, thank You for this food, for this day, for this family. Keep guiding us like You have today. Amen."

"Amen," Mark and Mary said together.

For thirty seconds, nobody spoke. Just the sound of spoons on plates and the fan turning overhead. Then Mark couldn't hold it.

"So? What's the occasion?"

"Yeah, Mom, spill," Mary said, mouth half full.

Mom set her spoon down. That proud smile again — the one that made her look ten years younger. "You know I've been a senior nurse for a while. At this level, some countries recruit for doctor positions."

Mark stopped chewing. "Don't tell me—"

"Yes," she said. "I got an offer."

Mary's cup almost tipped. "Where? Where?"

"Brookhaven. In the U.S."

The word hung there. _America._ It sounded like a TV channel, not a place you could go.

"WHAT? That's amazing!" Mark said, and he meant it, even though his chest did something weird — half lift, half drop.

"Bro," Mary gasped, dramatic as always, "this isn't amazing. It's fantastic. We're going to _America_!"

Mark laughed before he could stop it. "What about your friends?"

Mary waved him off with three fingers, like she was shooing a fly. "Tsk, tsk, tsk. Foolish older brother. We have FaceChat. Modern times. Try to keep up."

"Yeah, yeah, brat," Mark muttered, but he was smiling.

"When do we leave?" Mary asked, already done with him.

"This Saturday."

"That's two days!" Mary jumped up from the chair. "Two days! Let's gooo!"

The next two days didn't feel real.

Mary lived them at 2x speed — hugging people, laughing too loud, taking selfies with classmates she'd barely spoken to last month. She cried once, then told everyone it was allergies.

Mark didn't have anyone to say goodbye to. He spent the time fixing the wobbly leg on the kitchen table, returning Gogo's bucket, and sitting on the roof at night listening to the city. No friends. No enemies. Just him and the quiet hum of leaving.

Saturday morning came too fast.

They stepped outside looking like they were about to be on a poster. Mom in a royal blue dress and heels, braids tied into a clean ponytail, purse on her arm. Mary in tight jeans, long-sleeve crop top, fresh sneakers, her short hair messy on purpose. Mark kept it simple — black hoodie, black cargos, Bottegas. Understated. If you knew, you knew.

"Ready?" Mom asked.

"More than," Mary said, grinning.

"Yeah," Mark said. It was the only word that fit.

"Then let's go."

Airport security, boarding passes, the weird cold of the airplane air. Economy seats, three in a row. The flight was two hours. Mark loaded a game and let the loading screen loop. Mom fell asleep before takeoff, head against the window. Mary had her phone out, captioning every cloud: _New Life Begins 🇺🇸_.

When they landed, the air smelled different. Cleaner, but artificial. Like a mall.

Baggage claim. A woman in a blazer held a sign: _The Wilsons_.

"Hello, miss. Pleasure to meet you. Follow me," she said. Professional smile. Flat shoes for walking.

Outside, a black taxi idled.

"I'm Sara," she said once they were in. "I'll help you settle in Brookhaven."

The drive started like a movie. Skyscrapers. Glass buildings. Billboards with people selling teeth and lawyers selling revenge. Neon signs even in daylight. Mary had her face to the window, narrating like a tour guide. Mom asked Sara about the hospital, her schedule, whether the neighborhood was safe.

Mark watched. He counted how many blocks they passed before the glass started to crack.

Ten minutes. Then twenty. The buildings got shorter. The windows got dirtier. Neon turned into flickering street lamps with plastic covers gone yellow. Storefronts had bars. Walls had tags. The same names repeated: BLUE. BLUE. BLUE.

Mary stopped talking.

They passed a rusted sign with two bullet holes in it: _Welcome to Downtown Brookhaven._

The taxi stopped on a street where every house had something wrong with it — missing stairs, boarded windows, fences leaning like drunk men.

Sara got out first. "This way, please."

They walked. Footsteps echoed. A man under a blanket on the corner didn't look up. Three teens on a stoop passed a bottle, eyes sliding over Mark and then away, like he wasn't worth the trouble yet. The air smelled like wet trash and old grease.

The house was at the end. Paint faded to gray. Porch light hanging by a wire. Fence that would sing if you touched it.

"Doctor Wilson, this is the house the hospital assigned you," Sara said, still polite. "You start tomorrow."

Mary stared. "Wait… we're living here? It looks terrible."

"Don't be a baby," Mark said. He didn't mean it harsh. It was just true. "Our house in Zim was the same."

"Yeah, in Zimbabwe," Mary snapped. "But this is _America_."

Mom didn't argue with either of them. She just took the keys from Sara, thanked her, and stood on the porch watching them walk in.

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Inside, dust hung in the air like fog. Floorboards complained under their shoes. Two windows were cracked. Cobwebs lived in the corners like they paid rent. But there was a staircase. Two floors. A real upstairs. That was more than they'd had.

"Damn, it's dusty," Mary coughed, waving her hand.

"Mary! Language," Mom said, handkerchief already over her mouth.

"Sorry, Mom… but look at this place."

"Nothing a little cleaning can't fix," Mom said, and she meant it. She was already rolling up her sleeves.

"Ughhh, I hate cleaning," Mary groaned, dramatic again.

"Then decide what you hate more," Mark said, looking at her. "Cleaning, or living in a dust-infested house."

Mary's glare went evil-playful. "Why you—"

"Your brother's right," Mom cut in. "So? What's it gonna be?"

Mary sighed like the world was ending. "Fine. Let's get this over with."

They worked. Two hours of sweeping, scrubbing, hauling, swearing under breath, and laughing when the bucket tipped over. Mark's hoodie came off halfway through. White t-shirt, sweat on his neck. By the time they dropped to the floor, the sun was low and the room was orange.

"That was way too much work," Mary muttered, fanning herself with a magazine.

"But now it's clean," Mom said, hands on her hips, looking around like she'd just won a fight.

It wasn't perfect. The crack in the window was still there. The floor still creaked. But it smelled like soap instead of mildew. It felt like they'd earned it.

"By the way," Mom said, sitting down with them. "Enrollments."

Mark and Mary looked up.

"Once you're in, you're officially in high school. Mark…" She reached over and ruffled his hair. He let her. "Try to make friends this time, okay?"

"Okay, Mom… I get it," he said, chuckling despite himself.

"And Mary." Mom's eyebrow went up. "Try not to cause trouble."

"I won't, Mom," Mary said, and nobody in the room believed her, including her.

Mom stood, brushing dust off her dress. "Head to your rooms. Big day tomorrow."

One by one they went upstairs.

Mark shut his door, dropped his bag, and sat on the edge of the bed. The mattress was thin. The window looked out at a streetlamp that buzzed. Somewhere a dog barked and didn't stop.

He exhaled, long and slow.

Tomorrow, Brookhaven would start to show its true colors.

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