A Breeze in Mortal Life: "Chasing a draft again? Are you kidding me? Didn't I send it to you fifty minutes ago? Brother, do you ask for a draft every fifty minutes? That's too much. If you keep this up, I'm blocking you!"
A Breeze in Mortal Life: "By the way, you haven't given me any feedback. How is it? Give me an evaluation?"
Xia Sheng did not reply because he didn't know how to evaluate it better, so he started seeking help. He entered the male-focused editor group, asking their opinions on the draft of "The Chronicles of Sword and Magic."
"Everyone, feel free to speak up. Don't consider A Breeze's platinum status; that platinum was achieved in the female genre. Now he's switching to the male genre and doesn't have a reader base in this channel. Just treat him as a newcomer to web novels and give some feedback on the opening of 'The Chronicles of Sword and Magic'. Feel free to share more."
