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Chapter 158 - Iam sad

Author's Note

This is not a thank you, a request, or an explanation.

Since I published the first chapter, this has been my very first literary and writing experience. I will be honest with you: I have never read a single novel before; I only rely on my own deductions. In every chapter, I was always waiting for a comment or support—not for the sake of views, but because I wanted a real person to evaluate or analyze. Unfortunately, that never happened.

And the result? After analyzing the entire novel using AI tools (who themselves never objected or said anything until I asked for real criticism just now), it became clear that the world-building, the depth of the protagonist's character, the power scaling, and many other features... all went up in smoke due to more critical aspects of writing: repeated clichés, weak language, cheap plot points, and childish scenes... etc.

I started completely on my own, without help, experience, or even the proper tools. I waited for audience interaction, but despite having 80,000 views, 90% of the Power Stones were sent by me to myself. The collections are few; there are no reviews. There isn't even a reader who shares a comment to clarify their opinion or anything. This is despite the fact that I saw the actual reader metrics, which were promising and made me feel happy, leading me to thank you many times in the Author's Note chapters.

Anyway, I will wait a little after this chapter to see if there is a real audience following this story. If not, then I will stop. Honestly, I am in a very difficult academic period; I do not have the capacity to perform a full rewrite of the story as I wanted. Therefore, if this is the case, I will delete the story and start anew. A chapter every day or two, and I will not try to address the readers. Why? Simply because there is no actual reader following or objecting to the story's flaws. And perhaps I will stop writing altogether; frankly, many readers love erotic stories and cheap things instead of long stories with actual meaning.

Thank you.

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