The Fight Victor Desired
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Chapter — The Fight He Had Been Waiting For
"This is it! This was the kind of fight I always wanted!"
The thought burned through Victor's mind as he continued dodging Fean's relentless attacks.
His golden eyes were brighter than ever.
For so long, Victor had been holding himself back.
He had relied almost entirely on his instincts and movement, doing everything he could to survive Fean's overwhelming barrage.
But that was no longer enough.
If he wanted to keep fighting like this, he had to stop restraining himself.
Victor drew in a deep breath.
The air inside the ruined cave seemed to change.
For a brief moment, everything became strangely still.
Then—
Boom!
A massive surge of mana erupted from Victor's body.
The force spread through the cave in an instant.
