Chapter 22: Letting Go
[Highway South — Day 12, Late Afternoon]
Jim asked to stop at a place with a tree.
Not in those words. The words came out broken, re-assembled from syllables that his fever-cracked lips couldn't quite shape: "Rick. Need... stop. Tree. Not in front... the kids."
I was at the RV's wheel when Jacqui's voice came from the back bedroom — "He's asking for Rick. He wants to stop" — and the specific quality of the sentence, the finality it carried, put my foot on the brake before the request reached my brain.
The convoy pulled over on a stretch of highway that had been pretty once — rolling Georgia hills, hardwoods turning amber in the autumn, a median strip of wild grass that the state DOT would never mow again. A live oak stood twenty yards from the shoulder, its canopy broad and low, its trunk thick enough that a man propped against it would have his back protected and his face turned toward the west where the sun was making its afternoon descent.
Rick carried Jim. Not helped — carried. The fever had taken forty pounds from a man who'd been spare to begin with, and what remained was a frame of bone and tendon wrapped in skin that had gone the specific grey-yellow of a body consuming itself to fuel a war it was losing. Jim's head hung against Rick's shoulder, and his eyes — open, lucid in a way they hadn't been for hours, the false clarity that sometimes preceded the end — tracked the tree as Rick lowered him against the trunk.
The bark pressed into Jim's back. He sighed. The sound was grateful.
"This is good," he said.
The camp gathered. Not everyone — Lori kept Carl in the car, and Carol kept Sophia in the RV, the specific decisions of mothers who understood that some images shouldn't be stored in children's memories. The rest formed a loose semicircle: Rick, Shane, Dale, Daryl, Andrea, T-Dog, Jacqui, me.
Shane spoke first. "Jim, we can still—"
"No." Jim's voice carried surprising force. The word cut through Shane's sentence and the afternoon air and the grief that was already settling over the group like pollen. "I'm done. I know what's next. I've known since the bite."
"We're close to the CDC. If there's a chance—"
"There's no chance and you know it." Jim's eyes found Shane, and the look he gave was the look of a dying man who'd lost patience with the lies of the living. "I can feel it. Moving through me. I won't do that in front of people. In front of the kids."
Shane's jaw tightened. He wanted to argue — not from compassion, but from the specific discomfort of a man who preferred action over acceptance. But the argument was already lost, because Jim had invoked the one principle that overrode Shane's pragmatism: the children. Sophia and Carl, sleeping in vehicles, innocent of the mathematics of infection, deserving of a world where people didn't turn into monsters in front of them.
Shane stepped back. His silence was concession.
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The goodbyes were small. Personal. The kind of ceremony that the world before would have dressed in flowers and scripture but that this world stripped to bone.
Rick went first. He crouched beside Jim, took his hand — not shook, held — and leaned close enough that whatever he said was for Jim alone. I couldn't hear the words. Didn't need to. The set of Rick's shoulders told the story: a promise, a gratitude, a farewell.
Dale followed. He removed his hat — the fishing hat that had become as much a part of his silhouette as his RV and his binoculars — and held it against his chest, and the prayer he offered was not religious in the formal sense but carried the cadence of a man who'd lived long enough to know that some words were owed to the dying regardless of who was listening.
Daryl hung back. He didn't approach, didn't speak, didn't offer. But he nodded — once, from six feet away — and Jim nodded back, and the exchange was complete. Two men who understood that some farewells didn't require proximity.
Jacqui cried. She'd been Jim's primary caretaker since the bite, pressing cloths to his forehead, measuring his temperature by touch, performing the specific, heroic labor of tending a man whose body was becoming the enemy. She kissed his forehead and the tears fell onto his skin and she said something in a language I didn't speak — not foreign, just private — and then she stood and walked away and didn't look back.
T-Dog. Andrea, brief, stiff, carrying Amy's ghost in the distance she kept between herself and anyone else's grief. The others, one by one, offering what they could. Words, touches, silence.
I went last.
I knelt beside the tree. The bark was rough against my knee and the grass was damp and Jim's face, turned toward me, held the terrible clarity of a man running on the last battery the fever hadn't burned through.
"You dug those graves," Jim whispered. His voice was a thread. "Before the attack. You dug them because you knew."
The sentence should have been directed at himself — Jim had been the one digging graves, possessed by a premonition he couldn't explain. But his eyes were locked on mine, and the pronoun was aimed at me, and the meaning was clear.
You knew. Before anyone else. You always know.
"So did you," I said. The lie was gentle. A gift wrapped in fiction, offered to a man who'd earned the mercy of not dying with unanswered questions.
Jim's mouth moved. Almost a smile. "Take care of them."
"I will."
His hand found mine. The grip was weak — bird bones, burning skin, the last muscular act of a man whose body had already signed the surrender papers — and it held for three heartbeats before the fingers loosened and fell.
I stood. Brushed the grass from my knee. Walked back to the convoy.
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The caravan pulled away at twenty miles per hour. I drove the RV, because Dale's hands were shaking and nobody mentioned it. Through the side mirror, the tree was visible for thirty seconds — the broad canopy, the thick trunk, and the shape of a man propped against it, small and getting smaller, his face turned toward the falling sun.
Jim raised one hand. A wave. Weak, barely visible, the final gesture of a man whose body was failing and whose spirit was not.
I waved back. My hand moved from the steering wheel to the window and I held it there until the tree disappeared behind a rise and the mirror showed nothing but empty highway.
Callback: Day Two, the quarry camp fire, Jim sitting apart from the group with a shovel in his hands and a look on his face that nobody understood. He'd known. Not the way I knew — not from a screen in another life — but from somewhere deeper, somewhere the show hadn't explained and this reality didn't need to. Jim had felt the graves before they were needed, and he'd dug them, and then he'd filled them, and now he was joining them.
Back in the RV, I buckled my seatbelt. The click was small, metallic, precise — the sound of a mechanism designed for a world where the worst thing that happened in a car was a collision. Civilization's muscle memory, embedded in a strip of nylon and a spring-loaded clasp. The world was ending but the seatbelt still worked, and the absurdity of it — the beautiful, heartbreaking absurdity — sat in my chest like a stone.
The highway stretched south. The Atlanta skyline appeared through the windshield, dark towers against a sky going orange, and somewhere in that silhouette, a concrete building held a man, a countdown, and the last answers this world would offer.
I tightened my grip on the wheel and drove.
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