As a new author, I initially intended for this book to be a practice run. Consequently, the writing was somewhat fragmented in the beginning, and the setting was admittedly unoriginal. Please forgive me; it is my first time writing a novel.
As I continue to write, I find myself understanding the nuances of prose and pacing better. I can feel myself growing, though looking back at the earlier chapters often feels awkward now—I can't help but want to fix them.
In fact, I have already revised a significant amount of the early content, minor settings, and prose. Because of those revisions, the word count has ballooned to nearly 300,000 words. Regardless of how well the book performs, I will do my best to write.
Next, I want to address the question I see most frequently in the comments.
Where is the lightning? What happened to the lightning?
The themes of "Control" and "Lightning" in this book should be understood as distinct paths. They are the two primary abilities the protagonist develops. As explained in the latest Chapter 139, he focuses primarily on "Control" during the early stages. I can promise that lightning is coming; he will acquire it during the summer vacation following his third year. I won't spoil any more than that.
Furthermore, the combination of Control and Lightning represents the protagonist's evolving style. After this period of cautious accumulation, his actions will become much more proactive.
Another point involves the protagonist's perceived indecisiveness in recent conflicts, specifically regarding the arrogance of the Slytherin pure-bloods.
The reason for this buildup is that those lead pure-blood students are going to suffer quite a lot in future plotlines. I was worried that if I didn't make them sufficiently annoying now, readers might actually feel sorry for them later. Once the arc is complete, I will consider whether the buildup needs further adjustment, but for now, it remains as is.
I read all of your comments and carefully consider your suggestions. If there's one thing I pride myself on, it's that I listen to advice. If there are parts that cause significant dissatisfaction or contain truly "poisonous" plot elements, I will revise them, though I will always prioritize the necessary contextual buildup.
Finally, I wish you all good health! May all your wishes come true.
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