Before you continue reading I just want to lay somethings out.
The story is mostly 25% AI.
YES i won't deny the fact I used Ai but only to improve the the writing style cause my writing is quite vague and I do have a poor knowledge in literature even back in highschool I regularly got an f and in Uni currently studying mathematics. Though I believe constant writing will help improve by writing abilities so bare with it for now.
For example
My original writing
"Meet Maxwell Connor
A comic like name one may say, well it is the world of a comic.
Maxwell was a Police officer back on earth a respectable one at that though at the age of 30 he was still single and normally read comic and watch mostly action movies during his free time and this was a life he was satisfied with."
Improve writing
"Maxwell Connor.
It was, he had always privately acknowledged, the kind of name that belonged in a comic book. Solid, slightly generic, the name of a background character who shows up in panel three and gets punched through a wall before the reader learns his last name. His mother had apparently found it distinguished. His colleagues at the precinct had found it funny. Maxwell had found it fine, which was how he found most things about his life on Earth — fine, functional, entirely satisfactory in the way that a well-maintained apartment is satisfactory: nothing wrong with it, nothing particularly exciting about it either.
He had been a police officer for seven years, assigned to a mid-sized precinct in a mid-sized city where the crime was real but not cinematic, where the paperwork outweighed the fieldwork, and where a competent, unbothered officer who filed his reports on time and didn't make trouble for his supervisors could build a quiet career without anyone asking too many questions about what he wanted from life. Maxwell had been that officer. He had been good at it, in the methodical way he was good at most things he applied himself to, and he had gone home at the end of each shift to a one-bedroom apartment, a reasonable collection of graphic novels stacked along one wall, and a rotating queue of action films he worked through on weekends with the focused appreciation of a man who considered the genre underrated.
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If you considered my original writing ok you can just let me know.
And note I actually put a lot of effort into the story, brainstorming ways on actually keeping the story on track and progressing at a stable pace if not I could have just made the mc fighting the whole DC from chapter 1
If you feel the story isn't for you, it's actually ok everyone has a preference and not every story on earth is a masterpiece. I had a fun story and decided to share it one the platform that's all.
Also the story might feel boring for those who are expecting the MC to go around f**king all the female characters in the DC universe.
--yours sincerely
David Osi