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The White-Eyed Fiend

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When bandits descend on his home and leave his clan butchered, the only thing left to him is a strange inheritance no one ever understood: his great-grandfather’s White Eye. Cornered, bleeding, and moments from death, Briggs commits an act of pure madness—ripping out his own eye and replacing it with the relic. What awakens inside him is the Perceived Eye, a terrifying power that allows him to read intent, see the flow of qi, sharpen his senses beyond reason, and copy martial techniques after witnessing them. But Briggs is no righteous hero. Cold, brilliant, and monstrously ruthless, he begins his journey through the cultivation world with blood on his hands and hatred in his heart. To him, mercy is weakness, trust is a tool, and morality is for the powerless. Sects, clans, masters, rivals—none of them are safe from the schemes of a young man willing to lie, manipulate, and slaughter his way to the top. As enemies close in and the truth behind the White Eye begins to surface, Briggs carves a path through a world where power decides everything. And with every battle, every betrayal, and every stolen technique, he becomes something far more dangerous than the men who destroyed his family. He becomes a monster the heavens themselves may not be able to control.
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Chapter 1 - Chapter Two: Ashes on the Road

he first lesson Briggs learned after leaving the ruins of his home was simple:

the world did not care.

It did not care that his family had been hacked apart like livestock.

It did not care that the night still echoed in his skull with screams.

It did not care that one of his eyes was no longer his own.

The world only cared whether he was strong enough to keep walking.

So Briggs walked.

He staggered out of the smoking remnants of his clan estate with dried blood on his neck, fresh blood crusted beneath his fingernails, and one eye white as bone. He tore a strip from a corpse-stained curtain and wrapped it over the white eye before dawn could expose him. His movements were stiff, his throat mangled from the stab wound that had nearly killed him, but he moved with a stubborn, venomous will.

He refused to die.

Not because life was precious.

Because he had not yet made the world pay.

The road beyond the town was a ribbon of mud, stone, and wheel tracks. Briggs walked it barefoot for two days, surviving on ditch water and half-rotten pears stolen from abandoned carts. By the third day, the White Eye's side effects became clearer.

His hearing sharpened first.

He could hear the flutter of wings in dead trees.

The scrape of rats in culverts.

The faint shift of weight in men trying to sneak behind him.

His sight changed next.

Qi was no longer some abstract force spoken of by elders in dusty halls. It had become visible—thin currents winding through the world like pale veins under skin. Briggs could see it pooling in stones, bleeding from medicinal weeds, coiling in the muscles of beasts, and gathering most brightly in trained martial bodies.

It made him hate the weak even more.

He saw now how crude and blind most people were. They stumbled through the world unable to perceive the currents around them. They guessed. They hoped. They prayed.

Briggs watched.

Briggs learned.

And Briggs remembered.

On the fourth night, three men tried to rob him.

They were not cultivators. Just desperate road scavengers with broken sandals, rusted cleavers, and the swagger of men who mistook a skinny youth for easy prey. Briggs had already heard them long before they stepped from the brush. He had heard one favor his left leg. Another breathing through a clogged nose. The third kept rubbing his thumb over a blade hilt, a nervous habit telegraphed in the rhythm of leather and sweat.

The White Eye saw even more.

Intent.

Not thoughts, not words—something simpler and uglier. The body's honest truth before action. Tiny shifts in shoulder line. Focus of gaze. The tightening of fingers before violence.

To Briggs, they might as well have announced their attacks.

"Boy," the tallest one said, stepping into the moonlight. "Drop your pack."

Briggs stopped walking.

His uncovered black eye was dull and tired.

The wrapped eye stared blankly beneath the cloth.

He made his voice weak, hoarse from the wound in his throat. "There's nothing valuable."

The men grinned.

That was when Briggs knew exactly what they were.

Predators who had lived too long feeding on fear.

Good.

He hated competition.

The first lunged with the cleaver.

Briggs shifted half a step.

That was all.

The blade missed his ribs by the width of a fingernail. The movement was crude but efficient. Briggs watched the angle, the foot placement, the twist in the wrist. The White Eye burned.

And he understood.

He snatched a fist-sized stone from the roadside and smashed it into the man's temple with a brutally short swing. Bone cracked. The scavenger dropped to one knee, screaming.

The second man came from the right, knife low.

Briggs had already seen it in the man's posture.

He turned, copied the first man's cleaver motion with the stone still in hand, and crushed the attacker's fingers before ramming two savage knuckles into his throat wound. The man gagged, stumbled back, and Briggs pounced like a rabid dog, driving the stone down again and again into the man's face until it was no longer a face.

The third turned to run.

Briggs hated that most.

He sprinted after him despite his injuries, lungs burning, vision swimming. The White Eye traced the man's panic in the twitch of every limb. Briggs bent, grabbed the fallen cleaver, and—remembering the earlier swing—hurled it.

He had never thrown a cleaver in his life.

The White Eye corrected the angle as he moved.

The blade spun once and buried itself into the back of the man's neck.

The scavenger dropped into the mud and twitched.

Briggs stood over him for a long moment, breathing hard.

Then he knelt and searched the bodies.

Two copper shards.

A crust of stale bread.

One oilskin pouch with healing salve diluted so badly it was nearly useless.

And from the tallest man, a torn booklet of crude combat diagrams: Roadside Butcher's Three Cuts.

Briggs stared at the pages.

Trash.

Clumsy.

Brutal.

Common.

But the White Eye did not care whether a technique was noble or filthy. It only cared whether it could be understood.

By dawn, Briggs had memorized the butcher's stance transitions, copied them a hundred times in an empty field, and refined the motion until even the crude technique became cleaner in his hands. That was when he realized the true terror of the eye.

It did not merely copy.

It compared.

Measured.

Corrected.

Refined through observation.

A genius might learn in months.

Briggs could steal in moments.

He smiled for the first time since the massacre.

It was not a warm smile.

It was the smile of something starving finally finding meat.

The road became easier after that.

He robbed thieves.

Killed stragglers.

Stripped corpses.

Stole blankets, jerky, sandals, and a short dagger from the dead. When starving, he baited smaller predators into attacking by pretending to limp worse than he was, then slit their throats and roasted the meat over stolen coals.

He also discovered something else.

The White Eye loved violence.

Not in some mystical, noble way.

Not as a test.

Not as fate.

When Briggs fought with total concentration, the eye brightened, the world sharpened, and the flow of qi around motion became clearer. Bloodshed fed his understanding. The brink of death honed perception. The eye became most alive when he was most monstrous.

That suited him fine.

A week later he found the first body hanging from a tree.

An old beggar. Empty pockets. Tongue blackened by crows.

Briggs looked at the corpse, the rope, the bruised neck, the signs of a struggle.

Three men. One used a hooked blade. One wore a sandal with a split sole. One had a limp.

His black eye narrowed.

He had seen those gait patterns before in town alleys, before his family died. Bandits had passed among ordinary filth without anyone noticing. The world was dense with wolves pretending to be men.

He cut the corpse down, not out of pity, but to check if anything had been hidden in the hems.

There was a single coin sewn into the sleeve.

Briggs took it and left the body for the crows.

By the time he saw the walls of the next town in the distance—low stone, smoke rising from chimneys, the stink of human density carried on the wind—he was thinner, harder, and far less human than the boy who had fled his home.

The guards barely looked at him.

Just another starving orphan drifting in with the dust.

Briggs lowered his head, coughed weakly, and shuffled through the gates.

Inside, the town swallowed him whole.

Its main streets were loud with merchants, apprentices, hawkers, and hired guards. The better districts wore clean banners and lacquered signs. The poor districts were another matter. Rotting wood. Rain-blackened alleys. Open drains. Coughing children. Drunks sleeping in straw. Prostitutes behind torn curtains. Gambling dens under lantern-light. Knives sold beside noodles. Corpses carted out at dawn.

The slums.

Briggs looked at them and felt something cold bloom in his chest.

A town like this was not a place.

It was a feeding ground.

So he vanished into it.

He slept in abandoned storehouses.

Stole food in careful amounts so no one noticed patterns.

Learned the alleys.

Mapped the gang territories.

Watched which thugs reported to whom.

Watched the guards take bribes.

Watched how fear moved people more efficiently than coin ever could.

Days passed.

Then weeks.

Briggs became one more rag-wrapped gutter rat among dozens.

No one saw the white eye hidden under cloth.

No one noticed the murderous intelligence measuring them all.

And in the nights, beneath broken roofs and rain-stained beams, Briggs practiced the butcher's cuts until they no longer looked like a roadside style. He added pieces stolen from dock brawlers, from caravan guards, from drunk enforcers showing off, from old men training children in public courtyards.

The White Eye took everything.

Briggs took more.

He was still weak.

Still poor.

Still only beginning.

But he no longer felt like prey.

He felt like a knife waiting inside a corpse.

And the slums, for all their noise and filth, had given him a new lesson:

In a ruined place, evil did not stand out.

It thrived.

Briggs intended to thrive better than anyone