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TAMING CARLOS

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Every night at 5:45, Valeria locks its doors. Every night, Nightfall hunts. Nobody survives. Nobody except me. He was sent to kill me. He had every reason to finish it. He didn't. When I looked into those silver eyes and saw something that wasn't hunger — something that looked unbearably like exhaustion — I made a decision that destroyed my entire life. I spoke to the monster like a person. His name is Carlos. He's still in there. And I know that pulling him out is going to cost me everything. I'm going anyway.
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Chapter 1 - Chapter 1: The Orange Archive

Chapter 1: The Orange Archive

The voice of the nation didn't belong to a person; it belonged to the sirens.

At 5:45 PM, the sky over Valeria began its transformation, bruising into a violent, radioactive orange. It was a beautiful sight, or it would have been, if it didn't signal the end of the world for the next twelve hours. Across every district, from the gleaming spires of the capital to the rusted outskirts, the Valerian Police Department's speakers tore through the air with a mechanical, rhythmic authority.

"It is a nationwide lockdown. 5:45 PM. All residents and citizens, return to your homes immediately. Return to your assigned locations now."

The announcement was a blunt instrument, hammering against the rising panic of the streets. Below the speakers, Valeria was a hive of controlled chaos. Local shopkeepers didn't just close; they slammed their corrugated metal shutters down with a deafening rattle, locking them with trembling hands. The streets were thick with the smell of burning rubber and desperation as cars accelerated onto the expressways, tires screaming. The VPD officers moved like shepherds through a stampede, their armored silhouettes weaving between vehicles, desperately trying to untangle the gridlock before the final toll.

They had fifteen minutes. Fifteen minutes before the gates locked, the lights dimmed, and the city was handed over to the things that owned the dark.

But in the heart of the frantic exodus, one figure remained perfectly still.

Raveene Hale stood deep in the shadows of a narrow alleyway, her back pressed against the cold, damp stone of a warehouse. She wore a dark nylon jacket, the fabric slick and functional, and a heavy hoodie pulled low enough to cast her face into total eclipse. To any passing officer, she was just another terrified citizen seeking a shortcut, but her eyes weren't looking for a way home. They were scanning the tactical movements of the police department with the practiced, clinical gaze of a hunter.

In her ear, a burst of static popped, followed by a frantic, hushed voice.

"Is it safe to go?" Raveene whispered, her voice barely a thread of sound against the wail of the sirens.

"Not yet. Wait," the voice crackled back. It was Clara, her technical lead and only confidante, sounding like she was on the verge of a heart attack. "Can't you just have patience for once? There's a patrol unit pivoting at the corner of Fourth."

Raveene exhaled, the mist of her breath visible in the cooling air. She shifted her weight, feeling the familiar, heavy thrum of adrenaline in her chest. "Goodness. I really don't have time for this. I have to step in before the entire grid goes live. You know I only have a fifteen-minute window before the internal sensors reset."

"Just take a deep breath, Raveene," Clara pleaded.

Raveene closed her eyes. She leaned her head back against the wall, clenching her fists until her knuckles turned white. She could feel the vibration of the city—the heavy boots, the distant slamming of doors, the low-frequency hum of the looming lockdown. Her heart was a drum, beating a frantic rhythm against her ribs.

"Okay," Clara's voice was sharper now, professional but strained. "The patrol turned. You're on."

"Jesus, it took you long enough, Clara," Raveene muttered, pushing off the wall.

"Just hurry up, okay?" Clara scoffed, though the sound was thick with anxiety. "I don't even know why you had to do this. This is literally one of the biggest, stupidest things you've ever done, and that is a very high bar for you."

Raveene didn't bother responding. She moved.

She was a shadow among shadows. With her hoodie pulled tight, she navigated the edge of the evacuation zone with a swift, predatory efficiency. She didn't run—running attracted eyes. Instead, she glided, timing her movements between the sweeps of the streetlights and the blind spots of the retreating officers. She moved through the blockades—the heavy steel barriers meant to funnel the public—with the expertise of someone who had spent her life learning how to bypass every fence her father had ever built for her.

Finally, she reached her target: an unremarkable, soot-stained building that had been cordoned off with weather-beaten police tape. She slipped through a side entrance, the heavy door clicking shut behind her with a finality that made her stomach flip. She leaned against the wood for a moment, pulling down her hoodie to catch her breath as she peered through a cracked window at the fading commotion outside.

"Mission accomplished," she breathed into the comm.

"Don't congratulate yourself yet," Clara shot back. "You're inside a tomb, Raveene."

Raveene turned away from the window, her flashlight flicking on to cut a bright, clinical path through the gloom. "I'm at the abandoned crime scene of Daniel Frey," she announced, her voice echoing slightly in the hollow space.

The room was a graveyard of ambition. Yellow tape draped like tattered banners across the furniture. The floor was a mosaic of shattered glass and splintered wood, signs of a struggle so violent it looked as though a small hurricane had been trapped within the four walls. Everything was coated in a fine layer of dust, save for the dark, dried stains on the floorboards that marked where Daniel Frey's life had ended.

"I'm having a bad feeling about this, Raveene," Clara said, her voice rising in pitch. "Please, why don't you just quit now? This isn't good. You know how dangerous it is. I'm not sure you'll even be able to gather enough evidence before Nightfall arrives."

"Have a little faith in me for once, Clara," Raveene said, already moving. She knelt and pulled a heavy evidence bag from her jacket, spreading out a series of stolen government documents and crime scene photos on a relatively clean patch of floor. Her eyes moved with lightning speed, scanning the lines of text and the grainy images. "I just need to confirm something. Something that has been hitting against the back of my mind ever since I started cross-referencing these reports."

"What is it?" Clara asked, her voice sharp with displeasure.

"Relax, Clara. I just... I have a feeling. A gut feeling that these attacks are not what everyone describes them to be."

"Yeah, you've told me a thousand times," Clara sighed. "You think the attacks sound 'human.' Raveene, you're sounding delusional. You're throwing yourself into the realm of the dead because of a hunch that contradicts every military report in the nation. You need to get out of there right now. I don't even know why I agreed to help you."

Raveene ignored the lecture, her focus narrowing. She held a photo of the victim's injuries up to the light, then turned her attention to the room itself. She began to crawl toward the far wall, her flashlight beam dancing over the debris.

There, near the baseboard, she saw it.

"I think I found something."

"What?" Clara's voice crackled.

"I don't know. It's crazy." Raveene reached out, her gloved fingers tracing a deep, jagged gash in the reinforced concrete of the wall. It was deep, almost three inches into the structure. "The slashes I'm seeing here on the wall... they're similar to the images in the file, but they don't look like they were made by a beast. It's weird. Beasts usually slash outward, using the weight of their limbs to tear, right?"

"Yes," Clara replied tentatively.

"But this..." Raveene leaned in closer, the cold of the wall seeping through her glove. "This looks more like a blade. It's too precise. Too calculated. Don't you think that's weird?"

"You aren't making sense, Raveene. Of course it looks like a blade. You've heard the stories of Nightfall. They say his claws are sharper than any alloy, precise enough to shave a man. You're looking at a disaster and trying to find a pattern that isn't there."

Raveene shook her head, her jaw set. "I don't know why I even have you on this line. You're not helping."

"How am I supposed to help you when you're literally standing in the jaws of death? I need you to get out of there, Raveene. You don't have time. Ten minutes have already passed since the sirens started. The window is closing."

Raveene didn't move. She continued to shuffle through the documents, comparing the entry wounds on the victim's chest to the marks on the wall. She was so deep in the puzzle, so focused on the discrepancy between the "monster" and the "executioner," that the silence of the building began to feel heavy.

Minutes ticked by, measured only by the sound of her own breathing. Then, Clara's voice came through again, but the annoyance was gone. It had been replaced by a cold, trembling terror.

"Um, Raveene? I... I think you need to get out of there. Right now."

Raveene frowned, her eyes still locked on a forensic photo. "What is it? I'm almost done."

"I'm detecting an anomaly," Clara whispered, her voice cracking. "Something doesn't sound right on the audio feed. Get out, Raveene. There is something wrong. The atmospheric pressure just dropped... my readings are going chaotic. Raveene, move!"

Raveene froze. The air in the room didn't just feel heavy anymore; it felt wrong. It was as if the oxygen had been sucked out, replaced by a static charge that made the hair on her arms stand up. The temperature plummeted, a sudden, bone-chilling frost that turned her breath into a thick cloud.

And then, she felt it.