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After fishing, Uncle Star and Red returned to their residence to cook their impressive catch. On their way home, they unexpectedly saw a noble carriage passing by, escorted by guards from the Arkhan Kingdom.
Red's eyes widened. "Uncle, look… that carriage is shining gold. Who's inside it, Uncle?"
"I don't know who's inside," Uncle Star replied, "but I'm sure it's a noble, since it's being escorted by royal guards from the Arkhan Kingdom."
"Oh yes, Uncle… I wanted to ask you something," Red said in a curious tone.
"What is it, kid?" Uncle Star asked.
"Do you know who the king or queen of the Arkhan Kingdom is?" Red asked.
"Sorry, I don't know who the ruler of the Arkhan Kingdom is. I've never met the king or queen," Uncle Star answered honestly.
"Okay… okay, Uncle," Red replied, though his curiosity only grew stronger.
As they continued walking back to Uncle Star's residence, Red couldn't stop thinking about the towering mountain in the distance the place where the Arkhan Kingdom and its capital were located.
Would Red one day set foot on that mountain?