By the time I am ending the first novel, I don't have any readers, but I am going to continue because the main reason I started this book was to write a story that I want, as well as practicing writing so I can write more stories, and get my idea of good fantasy out there.
And when I started this book it was my first time writing action, and all the other stuff.
I would love feedback on how to help my writing in later chapters, and other feedback.
If you have any questions please focus them on this chapter instead of future author review chapters.
-Now talking about the story-
The story is one that I focusing on a op main character, and the conflicts in the previous chapters are to set up a foundation so people can't say he's just an op character with no real conflict.
There will be future conflict, as well as more loss, but Logan will process through them with Iris, and other relationships.
Speaking of Iris, at the start of the story I wasn't planning on Logan having a romantic interest, but I changed that when I wrote his parents death, and I knew that he can't be so strong to the point where he can hold up the world, which is why I added break downs, both anger and sadness.
The reason it is not a #romance novel leads into my next focus. The start of the story and the novel leading up to this one, is just the journey to him becoming the overseer hence the title.
I will make another one of these chapters for after the end of the 2nd novel till then.
And if you are worried that it will go premium. it won't, mainly because it is to practice writing as well as getting my stories out there.