Chapter 16: Vatos
[Quarry Camp — Day 11 Since Transmigration, Dawn]
Daryl was packed before sunrise.
I found him at the edge of the clearing, crossbow slung, a makeshift pack on his back, filling a canteen from the water station with the mechanical efficiency of a man who'd already decided where he was going and was only pausing long enough to not die of thirst on the way.
"Going alone?" I asked.
"Don't need a committee."
"You need a navigator. The blood trail led south from the department store. That's downtown — dense blocks, high walker concentration, no clear sightlines. You go alone, you spend half the time figuring out which street you're on and the other half running from herds."
He tightened the canteen cap. Didn't look up. But his hands had slowed, and that was Daryl's equivalent of an invitation.
"I've got a supply cache in the city," I said. "Three blocks from the department store. Water, canned food, first aid — I stashed it during the solo recon. We grab the cache, pick up Merle's trail, search south. Two birds."
"Three." Rick materialized from behind the RV, Beretta already holstered, hat on. "The nursing home on Elm. I saw it from the rooftop — looked fortified. If there are people alive in there, they might have seen Merle pass through."
Daryl's jaw worked. He wanted to refuse — the lone wolf impulse was written into his DNA as deeply as his drawl — but the logic was irrefutable. Three objectives, one trip, better odds with numbers.
"Fine. But I lead once we hit the trail."
"Fair." I looked at the Challenger, parked beside the Cherokee where the morning light caught its red paint like a wound. "We take the Challenger. Faster, quieter than the van, and I know where to park it."
T-Dog stepped forward from the supply table. "I'll ride—"
"Stay." Rick put a hand on his shoulder. "Camp needs people. Shane's got watch, but the more eyes the better."
T-Dog's face cycled through protest and acceptance. He nodded, and the residual guilt about the dropped key flickered behind his eyes like a pilot light that never quite went out.
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[Downtown Atlanta — Midday]
I parked the Challenger three blocks from the department store, in the same commercial strip I'd used on the first rescue run. The spot was sheltered — between a delivery truck and a dumpster, not visible from the main road, close enough to our objectives that retrieval would be fast.
The cache came first. My office building, third floor, maintenance closet. The scratch on the doorframe was exactly where I'd left it — a thin horizontal line at knee height, invisible unless you knew to look. Callback: planting this cache during the solo recon on Day Five, marking it in code, memorizing the location with a clarity that no longer surprised me. The supplies were untouched: four water bottles, eight cans of food, a first aid kit, a flashlight, and the folding knife I'd stashed as backup.
We loaded the goods into the gym bag and moved south.
Merle's trail from the department store was three days old and functionally invisible to anyone who wasn't Daryl Dixon. But Daryl wasn't anyone. He tracked the blood drops — faded to rust-brown shadows on concrete, visible only at specific angles where the light caught the residual stain — with the focused intensity of a bloodhound following a scent. South on Forsyth, east on Mitchell, south again through an alley that opened onto a wide boulevard.
"He was movin' fast," Daryl murmured, crouched beside a smear on a fire hydrant. "One-handed, bleedin', still outpacing anything that followed him. Tough son of a bitch."
"He cauterized on a stove," Rick said. "The bleeding would've stopped within an hour."
"Merle don't stop for anything." Daryl rose. The trail continued south, and his body angled to follow it the way a compass needle angles north — automatically, inevitably.
My danger sense spiked.
Not cold. Not walker-cold. Hot. The prickling heat at the back of my neck that meant human danger, hostile intent, close. I threw my arm out, catching Rick's chest, stopping all three of us mid-stride.
"Don't—"
Tires screamed.
A car — dark sedan, windows down, engine revving — shot out of a side street and slammed to a stop ten feet ahead. Doors opened. Bodies poured out — three, four men, bandanas over faces, one carrying a bat, another a shotgun aimed at Daryl's chest.
"Drop the weapon! Drop it NOW!"
Daryl's crossbow came up. Rick's hand went to the Beretta. And arms wrapped around me from behind — someone I hadn't heard, hadn't sensed until the heat flared so bright it whited out directional information. Hands locked around my arms, pinning them. A voice in my ear, close enough that I could smell tobacco and old sweat: "You come with us, chinito. Nice and easy."
They dragged me toward the car. Daryl's bolt released — the thwack of the crossbow's arms snapping forward — and missed, burying itself in the sedan's rear panel as I was shoved through the open back door. A hand pushed my head down. The door slammed. The engine roared.
Through the rear window, I saw Rick and Daryl frozen on the sidewalk — Rick's gun drawn, Daryl reloading, both paralyzed by the specific calculation of shoot at a moving car with a hostage inside.
The sedan rounded a corner and they disappeared.
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[Fortified Building — Atlanta]
My wrists burned where the zip ties bit. The men who'd grabbed me were efficient — no unnecessary violence, no grandstanding, just the practiced restraint of people who'd done this before and wanted it over quickly. They marched me through a loading dock into a building that smelled like antiseptic and floor wax and, underneath it, the unmistakable scent of industrial cooking — the steam-table funk of institutional food prepared in bulk quantities.
A nursing home.
The show memory surfaced with photographic precision: the Vatos episode. Guillermo's crew, playing hard, running protection for a nursing home full of elderly patients abandoned by their staff when the outbreak hit. In the show, this had been a standoff that ended peacefully — Rick talked it out, Glenn got released, everyone went home with stories about the complexity of the apocalypse.
But the show version had been compressed. Television-tidy. The real version involved me zip-tied in a hallway while a man with a shaved head and a sawed-off shotgun stared at me like I was a problem he hadn't decided how to solve yet.
"Name?" Shaved Head — Guillermo, I knew, though he hadn't introduced himself.
"Glenn. Glenn Rhee."
"What are you doing in our territory, Glenn Rhee?"
"Looking for a missing person. We weren't here for your people."
Guillermo's eyes narrowed. He was mid-thirties, compact, with the shoulders of someone who'd done manual labor before the world ended and had continued doing it after. His shotgun rested across his forearm with the casual familiarity of a man who'd carried it so long it had become an extension of his skeleton.
"Your friends are armed. The redneck with the crossbow tried to shoot my boy."
"Your boys grabbed me off the street. What was he supposed to do?"
A flicker in Guillermo's expression — not anger, not amusement. Recognition. The specific look of a man encountering someone who wasn't afraid of him and was therefore either very brave or very stupid.
"You're in our house," he said. "We decide what happens next."
He walked me deeper into the building. Through a set of double doors. Into a room that broke every expectation my danger sense had been constructing.
Wheelchairs. Hospital beds with side rails. IV stands with bags that were mostly empty, the last fluid trickling through tubes connected to arms that were thin and spotted with age. Elderly people — a dozen, maybe fifteen — arranged in a common room that had been converted from a recreation area into a living space. A television sat dead in the corner. Folding tables held medications organized in rows. The air was warm, heated by portable gas units, and it smelled like talcum powder and iodine and the particular sweetness of very old skin.
An abuela in a wheelchair looked up at me. She wore a pink housecoat and her white hair was pinned under a net, and her expression carried the specific imperial warmth of a grandmother who'd been presiding over her domain for so long that the apocalypse was just another weather event to be endured with dignity.
"Mijo," she said. "You look thin. Have you eaten?"
The danger sense went silent. Not dampened — silent. The system registered no threat from this room, no hostility from the residents, no danger from the man with the shotgun who was watching me process what I was seeing.
"You're protecting them," I said.
Guillermo's jaw tightened. "Somebody has to."
"The staff left?"
"When the outbreak started. Just walked out. Left them in their beds." He lowered the shotgun. Not holstering — adjusting. The posture of a man who'd carried a weapon long enough to distinguish between pointing it and holding it. "Felipe — he's a nurse. He stayed. So did I. So did a few others. The guns, the crew, the territory — it's a show. We make ourselves look dangerous so nobody tests us."
"It's working."
"Not on your crossbow friend."
Through the window, I could see the parking lot — and beyond it, the street where Rick and Daryl were certainly working their way toward this building with the focused intensity of men retrieving a hostage. I had minutes, not hours.
"Listen to me," I said. "My people are coming. One's a sheriff's deputy, the other's the angriest man in Georgia, and they're both armed and they both think you're holding me prisoner."
"I am holding you prisoner."
"You're protecting your people. There's a difference. But they won't see it unless I tell them."
Guillermo studied me. The calculation was visible — could he trust the hostage to defuse the situation his own crew had created? Could he afford not to?
"What do you need?" he asked.
"Cut the zip ties. Let me meet them at the door. I explain. Nobody dies."
The silence lasted three heartbeats. Then Guillermo pulled a knife from his belt and cut the plastic bands. My wrists throbbed — the bruises would be purple by evening — but my hands were free.
"If your people shoot," Guillermo said, "we shoot back."
"Nobody's shooting anybody."
I walked to the front entrance just as Rick's shadow appeared at the gate, Beretta drawn, Daryl's crossbow visible behind his shoulder. Their faces carried the specific fury of men who'd spent thirty minutes tracking a hostage and were ready to turn a building into a crime scene.
"Rick. Stop." I held up both hands. "They're not what you think."
"They grabbed you off the street—"
"They're protecting a nursing home. Elderly patients, abandoned when the staff ran. Guillermo's crew is playing gang to keep raiders out. There's nobody dangerous in here. Just old people who need medicine."
Rick's gun stayed up. Behind me, Guillermo's men materialized at windows and doorways — not aiming, just present. The standoff balanced on a wire.
Daryl's crossbow lowered first. Not because he believed me — because he'd been scanning the building and his tracker's instincts had registered the same thing my danger sense had: this wasn't a stronghold. It was a shelter. The fortifications were theater. The real defense was geography and bluff.
"Show me," Rick said.
I led them inside. The abuela — whose name, I learned, was Señora Alvarez — offered Rick water and called him guapo. A tiny Chihuahua yapped at Daryl's boots from the safety of an elderly man's lap, and the old man informed Daryl that the dog was a "trained killer" and should be respected. Daryl stared at the three-pound animal with an expression so baffled it bordered on philosophical.
Rick lowered his weapon. Guillermo lowered his. The standoff dissolved into something that wasn't quite alliance but wasn't far from it — two groups recognizing each other as survivors rather than threats.
"We've got spare ammo," Guillermo said at the door, pressing a box of .38 rounds into Rick's hand. "Not much, but take it. You've got more people to protect."
"Thank you."
"Survive." Guillermo gripped my shoulder as I passed. "That's the only rule left."
I nodded. The bruises on my wrists pulsed with my heartbeat, and the zip-tie marks would take days to fade even with my regeneration. But the nursing home was safe, its residents were alive, and nobody had died over a misunderstanding in a dead city.
Small victories. They were the only kind this world offered.
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